Other people will have more to say, and more useful I'm sure, but my first impression is: put a stolen torch where the militiaman's...
The tips I can give you as a seasoned CoC player (I have finished it over 30 times and reached throne room double that) are:
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Elf Skill ((minortoken) Lvl 17 Uncommon)
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