In Gladiatorial Arena, Finals, Melvin introduces this as part of "CardStock I," but the module pages (both here and in Gladiatorial Arena, Qualifiers) don't use a Roman numeral. The Aftermath screen for the last battle of the finals, and the intro for the first battle in the qualifiers, and probably other places as well, all call it "CardStock 1."
not sure 'cause i'm french but in prison warden chapter 4 i think it's : No one has escape the prison iN and not iS
In the Dome of Heads 3rd Battle of the level 12 Temple of Scales treasure hunt. Gary is reading the adventure text "A mighty hydra stands berfore . . .".
Temple of Scales 4, "[...], will spread jungle plague throughout the cities towns of Cardhuntria." Most likely missing an "and"
I'm not sure if this is actually a text bug or just a point of lore, but in the Jewel of Alet Zhav, the enemies are 4 burning skeletons, but Gary calls them demons. Is this a thing? Are the skeletons demons? I thought they were just undead that were on fire. There is a mention of diabolic sigils in one of the other flavour texts, and Gary's talking about demons whispering in the next one, so maybe it is intended, and I'm just confused.
The Wizards Workshop Aftermath of Battle 3. "The fight will destroy the kitchen . . ." since the fight has already happened, shouldn't this be in the past tense. ie "The fight has destroyed the kitchen . . ."
High Mountain Pass 1, Melvin's comment says "It's a pity you spent all your money on pizza isn't Gary?" I think there's an "it" missing there, and maybe a comma or two depending on how Melvin's emphasis is intended. Also, at the end of the scenario description "They are also very clumsy, you can use this to their advantage." I think, given these are the GMs notes, that "You" here should be "adventurers"?
During Highway Robbery encounter 2, Melvin refused to get out of the way of the monster information for the entire encounter. Although I wonder if he was standing in the way on purpose, he does seem a little mean to Gary sometimes. http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5702/downinfront.png Also I'm not sure if this is the correct place to report this.
OK this is fixed. Thanks for spotting. I asked Melvin about this and he assured me it was an error on my behalf.
Thanks for picking this up. We've had two versions of these scenarios notes, the first as notes for the GM, the second as narrative spoken to you the player, hence the occasional confusion. Thank you!