The current News text talks about ranked MP using the Manor builds in February, even though we're now using the Celestial ones.
Pools of Slime, intro to second fight (Glistening Tunnels): Karen says she has a "peperoni" pizza to deliver (should be "pepperoni") Mauve Manticore 5, second battle victory text (the one about defending the house from trick-or-treaters): "You you can finally send..." (word "you" is repeated)
The Wizard's Workshop module cover header is missing an aposthrophe: http://wiki.cardhuntria.com/wiki/File:Wizard's_Workshop.jpg The Wizards Workshop -> The Wizard's Workshop
All of the adventures with an apostrophe in their name are missing it from their covers. I'm guessing the special font used does not contain an apostrophe.
Jewel of Alet Zhav, battle 4 (Tomb of Alet Zhav), intro text: Current: "Zhav waits at the far end of his ornate repository and a host of Zombies and Skeletons, stands ready to defend him." Comma should either be after "repository" or removed altogether. --------------------- Lord Batford's Manor, battle 4 (Ballroom), Gary's intro chatter: he says "Aloyzo the sniper is supposed to be deadly." The module text talks about "Alonzo" the sniper, so that's a mismatch. Outro text for Lord Batford's Manor, battle 4 could also use a proofread. At the very least, there's a period missing at the end. ---------------------- Citrine Demon Portal, battle 4 outro: "Who are and what are causing them?" would read better if the first "are" was removed.
Looks like the in-game chat font doesn't have support for non-Latin characters and forces my browser (Chrome on Ubuntu) to provide some hideous stand-ins:
Mauve Manticore 3, battle 3 (Bindings of Xanthicius) intro: "party of adventures" should be "party of adventurers"
Thanks for those. Alonzo is rumoured to be Aloyzo's long-lost half-brother, of course, so the confusion is understandable.
The Metallic Monstrosity, first scenario (Access Point) hint #2: "Use a variety of attacks to get around adaptation or Purge the adapation attachments." -> "Use a variety of attacks to get around adaptation or Purge the adaptation attachments." edit: The Perilous Gardens, second scenario (Pump Room) aftermath description: "The toxin pulses through the irratigation system, burning the fleshy walls with a searing poison. Surely this is the end of this cancerous infestation?" -> Is it supposed to be irrigation? edit2: In the Belly of the Beast, first scenario (The Mouth) pre-description: "You have awoken the Host and Darius has delivered you into its maw. Exiting the relative safety of the elevator, you step into a nightmare world where the walls and floors themselves pulse with hideous life and where pools of toxic enzymes raise a nauseating miasma. This is the Mouth of the host and its guardians appear with a rumble and a snarl." -> Should the Host be capitalized? Throne of the Mechanical Men, first scenario (The Captain) aftermath description: "As you deliver the killing blow to the hideous mutant brain, it disappears from sight, sliding into an alternate plane of existance. You hear its faint laughter beckoning from beyond. The chase is on!" -> plane of existence.
The Troll Tyrant, battle 3, outro: "The presence of Storges in these numbers can only mean to one thing." - remove the word "to" - (optional) change period to colon, and remove initial capital from next sentence
No clue if this has ever been brought up, but in the FAQ for the game, this sentence appears in the What will I have to pay section: You can buy treasure chests that contain loot and costumes for your characters. If there are treasure chests that contain costumes, I would like to know where to obtain them. Maybe: You can buy treasure chests that contain loot; you can also purchase alternate costumes for your characters. Because ; = awesome.
One more minor text bug in Oozeball: Mince Fillfork's name isn't consistent, it's Willfork on the character sprite itself. (Nom Gravy/Ron Gravy was already fixed a while ago)
